Blog #9

1. The men chase Phil into the cemetery and he is able to hide until he calls for help. Then the four masked men find him while he is on the phone and they start to attack him. The leader, Charles, begins to harass Phil for money, but he doesn't have any money with him. Charles becomes angered and kills Phil by slitting his throat. As Charles murders Phil police cars pull up to the cemetery and the four men are captured by authorities. As Charles is pushed into the back of the police car he laughs menacingly. 

2. The masked men follow Phil into the cemetery and start to beat him up. Charles demands money from Phil and Phil tells him he doesn't have any with him, but if he can go home he can give them money there. The men reluctantly agree and follow Phil to his apartment holding a gun to his back the whole way there. When they get to Phil's apartment he asks them to wait as he goes to his safe. The men look skeptical but agree. When Phil gets back he has a gun and shoots them all. Neighbors hear the gun shots and call the police.

3. Phil is cornered in the cemetery by the four masked men. The men start to harass and attack Phil. As they attack him Phil sees a group of men walking across the street and he yells for them. They don't hear him at first, but then they do and they rush to his help. The three strangers charge at the masked men and tackle them. Phil is able to break free and run away. He never hears about any of the men again.

Some of these alternate endings are pretty good, but I think I'll stick with my current ending. The ending I have now is more suspenseful and has more of a twist then the ones I have just written.